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Thanks to all for reading this. Feedback is welcomed.
Good luck, Ashlee.

Great RP, D! I liked the serious tone for this.

Minor critique, work on off camera versus on camera. There weren't any cameras around when Edge invited his mom to the show... you probably didn't have any reason to know about that or use it in the way you did. Lots of us use off camera story to build to something - knowing the difference helps.

Agreed with Ashlee...

Still enjoyed this. Pretty amazing promo. I think I like this Jay Briscoe.

Yeah, Ash I thought about that when I was writing. But I also thought that it would have been something that everyone would have noticed at the show. Just like going to Boston, and Cena's family wasn't there. So that was my justification. But, that whole on/off camera thing is something I've been guilty of many times, so I'll keep it all in mind going forth.

Thanks everyone else for the feedback.